Lune
The
lune was invented by Robert Kelly, who was unhappy with the western haiku.
(the seventeen syllable 5-7-5 version) This was because English uses less
syllables per word than Japanese (on average) The form he invented, named
after French for "moon" because of its similarity to the crescent moon,
had a pattern that better fit English still three lines, the syllabic scheme
was
5
- 3 - 5
A poet,
Jack Collom, loved this idea, especially when he began teaching children.
The problem was he remembered it wrong. He taught
3
- 5 - 3
words, not syllables
the form was easy to pick up
for the children.
Both are considered lunes.
See haiku